CABRALES CRITIQUE

My mission with Cabrales Critique is to help others build a strong foundation in the elements of English writing, allowing an individual the knowledge and confidence to achieve a college-level writing skill set. I plan to achieve my mission by strongly emphasizing paragraph and sentence structures with the use of outlining that is easy to learn while providing support and examples if necessary. So, please join me and let us both achieve success and growth in our education... My name is Alexander Cabrales and I'm twenty-six years old. I was born in Hayward, CA and raised in Fremont, CA. Growing up I've always had strong comprehension skills and I read well; however, my writing was atrocious looking back at it now. All throughout my early education I neglected to address the problems in my writing-fragments, wordy sentences, and awful structure. My writing was a mess. It wasn't until I entered college did I realize that I needed to fix my writing problems. So, after dropping my first..